You, the doodle on my page,
You fill me up with sudden rage.
You bitch and moan, the worst of sounds;
Those silent cries are so profound.
Your dreary tune, it makes me scream.
It made me find that this is no dream.
You, the villain of my pen,
I hope to never see again.
You poison those feeble light blue lines;
It gets into my human mind.
Because of you, I'm full of shame.
You're the one I'll always blame.
I will overcome you, filthy scum,
And show you what I have become.
I've spread my wings, you are the past.
I've freed myself of you, at last.
Though you crossed me many a time,
You, on my page, I'll never find.
I have my doubts of my pure bliss;
For you're a doodle I sorely miss.
The one I hold imperfectly dear,
My love for you was so unclear.
I've come to know this after a while;
And, when I think of you, I sweetly smile.
I am constantly wandering in affectionate submission to my whims.
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nu poamz! :3
Posted by mandamay - July 15th, 2009
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It's really simple in nature, and I think there's a few parts that definitely say you're 17. But I was amazed to see the parts where it sounds like you're much older.
You, the villain of my pen,
You poison those feeble light blue lines;
It gets into my human mind.
I was actually reading a philosophy book recently, and there was a quote from it (and this is me paraphrasing) that said "The greatest compliment you can give about someone's words, is that you wish you created them yourself"
There's a few words I'm very jealous I didn't think of first. It was pleasantly surprising.
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